more WiP

work-in-progress...

another new spread

playlist

marching on, together

gardening.

two pages [with unedited text]

dad

another page

a page from something new...

fly

...

a new thing, maybe...

spotify playlist

...with thanks to the mighty derek hill...

click here for a listen

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[important continuity tweak.]

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tweaking iii)

tweakings ii)

tweakings i)

time to die

page 48 - three versions...

another re-worked page...

epilogue spread

inside front cover with potential text.

additional text

revamped opening sequence...